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Berglund April 17, 2016 User blog:Berglund

Hello Internet,I'm Berglund and if I'm not scrolling on tumblr, watching youtube, or starring at anime boys in speedos;I'm writing.I don't really have a style as I feel like I should try to tackle any topic or any form.I've written fanfics, original stories,poems,what I ate for dinner....well,probably not that one but still.

I was writing these blog posts on a Wikia were a few were reading them...but not many.I've be debating for awhile if I wanted to move some over to CC and take some requests for Lessons or anything else.

So today is the day that I bring writers help to Community Central.

For this first blog I wanted to talk about the word 'Said'. Said is pretty basic, kinda like that kid living across the street who blasts music at 2 in the morning.When you over use said, readers will get annoyed. And then you will annoyed because they're not enjoying your content,people will defend the your lack of knowledge for synonyms and others will call you out for it.

It's like word war trenches down in those comments.


Here are 2 examples of one with said and one without said

Example one

I Rolled to my left looking at the blank white wall, the room was pretty dark.The other source's of light were the glow from Hinata's phone and the sun creeping through the cracks of the shades on the windows above everyone.

Sugawara happily skipped down the between the 2 rows of our sleeping team members

"Suga!" I said glaring at him,

"What?" he asked crossing his arms reaching his hand for the strung to open the blinds

"Don't you dare...." I said

Suga ignored me and yanked the blinds open

"AHH!" Everybody said as the light shot through the now bright white room.

"Good Morning Guys!" Suga said with open arms as he walked back down through the aisle

"Ukai say's breakfast is ready..."

Tsukishima blinked and slid on his glasses "I sometimes really can't stand any of you...expect for Marina."

"Thanks buddy!" I tried to thumbs up but I still lay in pain.


Example 2

I Rolled to my left looking at the blank white wall, the room was pretty dark.The other source's of light were the glow from Hinata's phone and the sun creeping through the cracks of the shades on the windows above everyone.

Sugawara happily skipped down the between the 2 rows of our sleeping team members

"Suga!" I hissed while glaring at him,

"What?" he asked crossing his arms reaching his hand for the strung to open the blinds

"Don't you dare...." I growled

Suga ignored me and yanked the blinds open

"AHH!" Everybody gasped as the light shot through the now bright white room.

"Good Morning Guys!" Suga projected with open arms as he walked back down through the aisle

"Ukai say's breakfast is ready..."

Tsukishima blinked and slid on his glasses "I sometimes really can't stand any of you...expect for Marina."

"Thanks buddy!" I tried to thumbs up but I still lay in pain.


Well...

I know I didn't have much in those 2 but Example 2 was better, wasn't it? That's because said wasn't in it!

I hope this kind helped you!If I should make more please leave a comment and i you want to request me to write something or want me to do a certain writers help then leave me a message on my wall

Here's a nice big list of other words!

239 to use other than said

accused acknowledged added addressed admitted
advised affirmed agreed announced answered
apologized approved argued asked asserted
assured avowed babbled barked bawled
beamed began begged bellowed bet
bleated blurted boasted boomed bragged
breathed broke in bubbled bugged burst out
called cautioned chatted chattered cheered
chided chimed in chirped chittered chocked
chortled chorused chuckled claimed clucked
coaxed commanded commented complained conceded
concluded confessed confided congratulated continued
convinced cooed corrected coughed countered
cried croaked crowed cursed dared
decided declared demanded denied described
disagreed disclosed divulged doubted drawled
dribbled echoed ended exclaimed explained
finished fretted gasped gawked gently
gibed giggled gloated greeted groaned
growled grunted grumbled guessed gulped
gurgled hinted hissed hollered howled
hypothesized imitated implied informed inquired
insisted interjected interrupted intoned jeered
jested joked laughed lectured lied
lisped maintained marveled mentioned mimicked
moaned mumbled murmured mused muttered
nagged nodded noted notified objected
observed offered ordered panted pestered
piped pleaded pled pointed out pondered
praised prayed proclaimed promised proposed
protested purred put in puzzled quavered
queried questioned quietly quipped quoted
ranted reasoned reassured recalled reckoned
related remarked remembered reminded repeated
replied reported requested resounded responded
retorted revealed roared sang sassed
screamed scoffed scolded shot shouted
shrieked shrilled sighed simpered smiled
smirked snapped snarled sneered sneeze
snicker sniffed sniffled snorted sobbed
spat speculated spluttered spoke sputtered
squeaked squealed stammered started stated
stormed stuttered suggested surmised taunted
teased tempted tested theorized threatened
told trilled urged uttered volunteered
vowed wailed warned went on wept
wheezed whimpered whined whispered wondered
worried yawned yakked yelled

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